0-3s Extreme Close-up + Quick Cut 1. Camera zooms in: green triangular shampoo bar lathers into dense, creamy foam in palms
2. Flash cut: Before use — a woman’s long, sparse hair drapes limply, scalp clearly visible through the strands; a handful of fallen long hairs on a sink Lines (colloquial & punchy): Ugh, your long hair’s this thin?!
Subtitles: Hair Growth Miracle for Long Hair! Upbeat, punchy drumbeats with a "zing" accent sound 4-8s Split-screen Montage (strong contrast) Left screen (Before Use): Top-down shot of the woman’s head, long hair thin enough to see scalp, strands break easily when combed
Right screen (After Use): Same woman, same angle — thick, flowing long hair cascades down, no visible scalp; hair looks bouncy and dense when flipped Lines (colloquial & punchy): One bar = BOOM — full, thick long hair!
Subtitles: Thin Long Hair → Thick Lush Locks Drumbeats accelerate, add a satisfying "whoosh" sound effect 9-12s Product Close-up + Hair Root Close-up 1. Green triangular shampoo bar sits on a bed of fresh herbs, "Hair Growth Formula" label glints
2. Quick cut: After use — close-up of the woman’s long hair roots, new fine hairs sprouting densely around existing strands Lines (colloquial & punchy): Plant-powered goodness, feeds your roots deep!
Subtitles: Stimulate New Hair Growth Music softens slightly, with a gentle rustling of herbs 13-15s Freeze Frame + Urgent Call to Action 1. Freeze on the before-after split screen for 1s to highlight the shocking contrast
2. Fade to product, pop-up text: "Grow Thick Long Hair NOW!" "Click to Buy" Lines (colloquial & punchy): Trust me, you gotta try this!
Subtitles: Don’t Miss Your Hair Growth Chance Music swells, ends with a crisp "ding" prompt